Cat

Detective Joe stopped integrity everyone they all told him that it wasn't them but he could see any lie between them while Fred Berger was sweating like a pig. Kathy Nolber tried to excuse herself from a fight after the detective Joe tried to catch her and said it got you! Then Kathy knobor said Detective Joe aren't you really poor so you would do any thing to get some more money by selling a pink diamond. Then Fred Berger said I saw her do it I saw her steel the pink diamond. Then Kathy billowed I did not I did not he is trying to frame me. Oh really then how come the holder for the pink diamond has your bracelet on the rim. It must've fell off while I was gazing at it. After Detective Joe took out his handcuffs and Kathy knobor had gone to jail and the pink diamond was returned to the museum/hotel.

The end! From Ms. Burgoyne- Cat, You have a clever ending and I like that you included a simile. You and I will need to edit this together. There are many missing end marks.

Shelby-I liked your rich language,but it did get a little confusing when Kathy tried to escape from the fight because you did not menction eny thing about the fight.