Jonah

 Det. Joe was done interrogating the subjects when he caught a pink glistening glow in the corner of his eye. “Wait one minute! What’s that glow coming from the pile of dinosaurs bones?!?” “He is right! There is a mysterious light coming from the bones!!!” bellowed the Gen. “Oh, my! You're right and, it must be the pink diamond!!” yelled Allee Gatah. “Ummmm, it’s probably isn’t the pink diamond?” said Kathy Nober nervously. “But it is the diamond see!!!” exclaimed the Gen. as he tossed the bones off the diamond. “That is my diamond and none of you can get it!!!” screamed Kathy as she rips the diamond out of the Gen.’s hands. Then all of a sudden Kathy stumps over a dinosaur bone!! “I'll take that.” said Det. Joe and he picks up the diamond. "I can't believe it!!! That it was you! "I would have thought it would be Allee Gatah, juding by the way she came in here!!" yelled the Gen. in shock. "But why? "Because I thought that Allee Gatah would buy it before so I had to steal it!! shouted Kathy. " I would never do such a thing in my life!! But it would be nice if I had the diamond!! Then Kathy suddenly sees the worlds first rubber band. She picks it up and shoots at Det. Joe. "OOOOOOWWWWWWWW!!! My eye!!" She had had alot better aim then Fred Burger. "I've finaly got the pink diamond! HA!! bellowed Kathy as she runs off with the diamond. "What the- AHHHH!!! "That is not your diamond" shouted Alle with her hand wrapped around Kathy's ankle. "I'll take that." exclaimed Det. Joe has he picks up the diamond. "You are going to jail for trying to steal a pink diamond worth 4,559,6699.98 dollars!" So det. Joe takes Kathy to his car and locks her in "Thank you so much Det. Joe for helping us with the case." said the Gen. "No problem!" replied Det. Joe.

**__ THE END!!! __** Brian- Jonah i liked how you said that she had better aim then fred burger it's funny. Sam-I like how you made it really funny, yet it was a very good ending.

Ms. Burgoyne- Jonah, your ending includes a lot of action and some great word choices (nervously, glistening, shouted). There are some spelling errors that need to be corrected.